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Spain Redux


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Lyn

SPAIN REDUX

This was originally written up, and takes place in, 2002, one of my earlier stories, so I thought I'd rework it, as hopefully my writing has improved since then !

My comments are from the time, not from now.

I went on holiday with my ex boyfriend Rob, recently. We were together from 1993 to 1997, so we split up 5 years ago and we've not really been intimate since, though we remain good friends and as I said, go on holiday sometimes.

I thought he was gorgeous when he was younger with his long hair - a lot of women STILL think he's gorgeous.

Myself, I've been out with a couple of guys since him, and just recently I've been seeing a girl (Nicole). Rob knew nothing about the at all about the two guys - let alone the girl!

We'd been away for a few days and the weather had been crap, so we drove around a lot looking for some decent weather. When we were in Alicante - Playa De San Juan, I think, Rob and I went for dinner and a drink at a cafe. The waitress was really friendly and kept smiling at Rob. She would naturally have thought we were a couple - no reason at all to think1 otherwise.

The waitress was absolutely GORGEOUS with long dark hair and the most FANTASTIC body.

We stayed there for quite a long time and we had quite a lot to drink, bit daft as we had the car with us ! The waitress was smiling at me too, I thought.

The place was getting quite empty by then and she was, I think, getting ready to go off shift, so she came and asked if she could sit with us and practice her English. She spoke good English anyway, but with a distinct American accent.

She was named Gabriela.

After an hour or so of conversation, she invited us back to her apartment for a drink. We had had quite enough to drink already ,but we still went - we could hardly have driven anyway!!

When we got there, she asked us if we were married, I said no.

Rob said we were friends.

I said we were exes.

She understood.

She got the tequila out and we did the ritual thing with the salt and the lemon.

Several of them!

I was hammered by this time, Rob was not much better. After we'd been talking a while she said very directly that she fancied Rob and she asked him if he liked her.

He looked at me and said, to her

"Yes"

He did.

She then asked him if he wanted to stay the night - with her.

I felt a little shiver of something.

I dont know what.

It may have been old jealousy, or the thought of me being there when he was having sex with this OTHER girl, (who was gorgeous, as I may have mentioned)..listening...watching!

I am quite the voyeur, more unusual for a woman, I realise, but there it is.

He said he did, and she asked me if I also wanted to stay, on the couch.

I lay down on her couch which was about 6 feet from the bed. I half closed my eyes and just watched.

She turned out the lights, but I could still see as it was getting close to dawn anyway.

I watched her strip naked and get into bed, my god she was fabulous, what a superb body! WOW !

Rob stripped down to his underpants and got into bed with her. She began kissing him straight away and there, under the sheet, I could her her hands moving around on him.

I was in a drunken, dreamy state, very very tired but I could not turn away or indeed do anything other than silently watch them, whilst pretending to be asleep.

Gabriela looked over at me and I assume she was satisfied that I was asleep. She then threw the sheets back so I could now see everything.

My god!

I saw his pants land on the floor, then she was kissing him and the next thing she was down him, sucking and licking his balls.

She'd got his dick in her hand and was you know, wanking him.

I knew she was doing it wrong - gripping him wrongly - and she was hurting him!

I'm (was) no great expert, myself, but he had (VERY shyly) showed me how to do it to him when we first got together, on his parents sofa.

I wanted to say something !

"You don't do it like that - you want to do it like this!"

But of course I couldn't really! LOL !

I stayed still and just watched as she took him in her mouth and gave him deep throat.

I cannot do this, I gag.

I suspect he's always wanted someone to do it - I don't know really. Maybe someone has.

( My male friend actually told me it doesn't feel very nice anyway! )

He looked really big in her mouth.

Then, she took it out of her mouth and slipped his cock between her big brown boobs.

They were really brown and really big .. and he looked really pink in the middle of them!

His foreskin had rolled back and she was licking his knob.

I was really struggling to keep still.

I REALLY wanted to join them !

I was squeezing my thighs together. As she was doing all this she was facing me, and I saw him move her legs round to get her pussy onto his face.

She groaned as he started licking her out.

I could not see it - but I could tell.

They were at this for about 20 minutes when she got up and turned round to face him, sitting right down onto his cock. Without stopping for a condom, as far as I could tell!

This was even worse, neither could see me so now I felt I could masturbate.

I even sat up and took my dress off. I didnt care any more. I figured they wouldn't stop even if they saw me. I'd only got my pants on, a g string if you're interested. My fingers were inside my knickers as I watched her bounce up and down on his cock.

His long shaft appearing and disappearing between her lovely, plump, golden buttocks, glistening as it was with her lady juices.

Every time that I touched myself, my spine was like a lightning rod.

I couldn't stand it, though.

I was almost crying as I went quietly out onto the balcony, I tried to be silent and neither seemed to notice me move, as with jelly-like legs I stood out there

I looked out over the town, trembling with desire. I didn't want to carry on with my masturbation, not where I was.

Anybody might have seen me standing there in just a g string!

So I just stood there, shivering.

I could hear them as clearly as if I'd been right there in bed with them.

Little squelches and moans from came her, Rob sounded out of breath.

The bed springs were creaking and then they stopped and then there was silence, followed by Rob groaning then

"Ooh, ooh, that's it, baby, that's better, yes?" she said

I peeked in through the curtain, she was holding her boobs up while he was holding his balls and kneeling astride her he wanked himself off over her big tits.

There was loads and loads of sperm.

His body was jerking and jerking and jerking. It was as if he hadnt come for years.

Maybe he hadn't!

Rob moaned and groaned.

I was absolutely dripping, I actually felt liquid dribble down my leg, like sweat.

I stepped back to the edge of the balcony and steadied myself, trying desperately to get my breathing back under control.

VERY unexpectedly the curtain opened and it was her, Gabrielle!

"Sorry, darling, did we wake you ?" she asked me, nearly naked on her balcony.

She seemed quite matter of fact about it!

She just said "Come on!"

...and with that, she took my hand and she led me to the bed.

Rob appeared to be half asleep and had covered himself with the sheet as I approached.

He looked at me, and I felt really naked.

I would not even go topless with him on the beach on this holiday, even though he's seen it all before. It seems silly, but we were not together any more.

I didnt know what she had in mind, so I lay down as if to go to sleep and she lay in the middle of us.

Rob was on his right side facing the window with his back to her, Gabriela rolled onto her right side, cuddled up to Rob. I lay on my back on the right side of the bed.

I dropped to sleep almost immediately and awoke some time later only to find Gabriela facing me and awake, looking at me.

She smiled.

Then she asked me what she'd asked Rob:

"Do you like me ?"

I knew I should say "Yes - you're very pretty, but I'm straight"

My heart was pounding. Pounding out of my chest. Thudding in my ears.

Rob was only three feet away.

I said "Yes", though.

I whispered that Rob didnt know anything about me with ..girls..or A girl.

Rob was asleep, his breathing was steady.

She leaned towards me and kissed me.

It was a breathtaking kiss, she was all hair and lips and scent.

I recognised the smell in her hair, it was sperm.

I didnt even let that put me off.

I was trying desparately to keep still once again.

She pulled the sheet off me and she pulled my G string down ... and off and I did not stop her.

She came back and kissed me, she whispered how she loved my mouth.

"You have a a pout" she said.

She'd wanted to kiss me since she first saw me, she admitted.

I was breathing really heavily and I was really REALLY nervous, as Rob was there - but my cunt was like it was on fire, except I was absolutely dripping wet. I think this was the most horny I'd ever been at the time !

She wanted me to suck her breasts, but of course I knew that Rob had come all over them!

As far as I knew she'd not washed them afterwards.

She was just playing with the nipples in front of my face and then she kissed me again, passionately and I just did it, I was lapping and licking all over them. They were gorgeous boobs.

They were definitely sticky with spent sperm.

She pulled away and lay down and indicated a circle with her finger. 'Swivel' I thought she meant! What she did mean was that I was get on top of her in a 69!

I wasn't that confident with women yet, but I did it. I went down on her. She opened her legs wide. Her pubic hair was shaved into a little rectangle above the slit, leaving the labia bare. I licked my way down there while she started on my bottom. She licked me there first, and then moved down to my pussy. It was heaven, I have to say.

I was as guilty of moaning and groaning as she was.

I felt movement, and - yes you guessed it - Rob was stirring. It was too late, by the time I'd moved he'd seen us!

His face!!! He could not BELIEVE what he was seeing!

Gabriela told him "YOURE DREAMING! ITS NOT REAL!" tee hee.

He didnt know what to do with himself, he went very red and I saw his dick get hard and move the sheet.

To my knowledge Rob had no particular interest in girls with girls, or so he'd said anyway. Bloody liar!! ;-)

He started to get out of the bed, but then he changed his mind got and back in again. Then, in a very shaky voice he told us to carry on doing what we were doing.

He had his cock in his hand and was starting to stroke himself. She re started with our lovemaking first.

She was holding my pussy open. She licked me inside and I felt Rob move right up next to her, then I felt another tongue. This second tongue was surrounded with a little stubble. I stuck my tongue out and went back to licking her wonderful big clit. She shivered - and I shivered - as they took turns to lick me inside. They were both missing my clitoris, so although i was incredibly horny, I wasnt 'getting off', it just felt nice.

Suddenly I felt the weight shift, and I felt Rob's thighs against mine, then I heard Rob groan as he slipped his cock into me.

God it felt good.

I was (and am still ;-)) very tight but SOOOO fucking wet that Rob's long cock just slipped on into me up to his balls.

He was really frantic, though. He was hammering away in and out of me, firmly gripping me by the waist.

"My GOD Rob, you're so fucking HARD!" I squealed

AND he was - the hardest he'd ever been, for me, anyway.

Her tongue was in there somewhere, I'd no idea quite where it was, everything was so wet and messy down there.

I found out afterwards that her face was right underneath me, and she was was licking my pussy, and licking his balls, as he hammered in and out of me.

He was almost chanting 'Oh Jesus fuck! Oh Jesus fuck!'.

The real shivers started with me when he moved his hands to grip the front of my thighs. That's when he started to really thrust hard, and more quickly, he was trembling too. I could feel him shaking against me, and this made me really really, well... I just came and came and came, my cunt grabbing him tighter as I headed, gasping, into spasm and squirting all over her bed and then he started to come.

"Have you taken your PILL?" he asked

Rob knew full well how slapdash I always was with my contraception!

I shook my head

"I didn't THINK I was going to get fucking LAID!" I sobbed

"FUCK! TOO LATE!" he grunted

Gripping my arse, firmly and... gasping for breath, he shot all his sperm deep up into me, into my fertile and unprotected tight, pink, glistening little pussy. It was really hot and still there was still loads of it, even though he'd recently plastered Gabriella's breasts with it all!

I have always orgasmed into overdrive when there was a risk of pregnancy. It's MAD I know, I have never had the slightest compulsion to have children! This was no exception I came and came and came as he pumped his hot load deep into me.

Finally he slipped out of me and from what I could feel he was still hard as his cock fell directly into Gabrielle's mouth! She licked and sucked his cock, all splattered as it was in a mixture of his sperm and my come.

I moved down and licked and licked and licked her pussy until she came. She had a huge orgasm, she got very very wet and it was all over my chin.

I then went and snogged Rob with my mouth all wet from Gabriella's pussy, but he just kissed me anyway, like he'd never kissed me before. It was electric!

Finally we all fell asleep after our excitement, but woke up really early, it was about 7.30. Gabrielle suggested we all go out for breakfast.

We all had a showers, she showered with Rob, and insisted on washing his cock and everything, he got all hard again (impressive) but she didn't do anything at all to relieve him. Neither did I.

I'd left my knickers behind at her apartment because I'd creamed them the night before, so I was in my pretty dress , totally naked underneath.

Rob was trying not to stare when we were walking through the gardens to the café but I think he'd got a good view, the dress was a bit see through and very split up the leg. He'd seen it all before, obviously, but he was horny and he wanted to see.

We had coffee and croissants at the cafe and had a really good laugh, actually. We were a bit spaced out through lack of sleep and.. I don't know, we may have been a little bit drunk still. Anyway, after we'd finished our meal she suggested that we go up to some gardens up the top. She said it was very beautiful up there and very secluded.

I wondered why she wanted secluded - and I was right to be wondering!

We went on up there and it was fabulous, with spectacular views down to the town and gorgeous gardens.

She whispered something to Rob and he went red, again, I think I saw his shorts move.

She then came over to me, and kissed me. Gorgeous kiss. I looked at her all wide eyed. She said she wanted to watch us, me and Rob, make love up there. My knees shook. I realized that I wanted to do it, as well.

She led me over to him. I said she'd already seen us do it, but she said she'd not see much as she was buried underneath us. She wanted us to be more romantic this time, anyway. She led me by the hand over to Rob. I asked Rob, if he wanted to, I actually asked him if he wanted ME I think. He gulped and nodded, he nodded a lot. There was a definite bulge in his shorts now, and he looked like he might cry.

She went up to him and pulled his shirt out and up, and he took it off. He undid his shorts and dropped them and his pants, and stood there naked and really hard, with them round his ankles. She knelt and helped him out of them and his sandals and then indicated he should lie down.

She pulled me by the hand towards him, and made me squat over him. I wasn't ready, I knew this, and she opened the bottom buttons of my dress so they could see my pussy, then she opened the top couple of buttons so she could cup my breasts. Every nerve ending was on fire by this time. She kissed me again, and Rob sat up and sucked my nipples, then she moved out of the way for him to kiss me. His tongue slid in and out of my mouth and then he nibbled my neck and licked my breasts again, then she sat me onto him. Onto his ROCK HARD erection.

My pussy was soaking and his cock slid in. I groaned.

She kept back now, and watched, her hand was inside her own dress, playing with her nipples.

Just then an elderly jogger ran through, he nearly fell over when he saw us, although only Rob was naked, it was still pretty obvious we were being rude. Lord knows what would have happened if he'd seen her and I snogging.

Pretty soon he was gone. Rob lasted a good length of time for me, he was beautiful, quite honestly.

She kissed and cuddled us both in turn, but she didn't really interfere.

She was pretty much the voyeur. I don't think I'd have liked a man watching us, but I didn't mind her, she was really open about it all. Like she did it all the time , but she didn't - I asked her ! She said we weren't the first couple she'd wanted to be with, but we were the first to agree, out of the four or five she'd asked!

We'd been having sex for quite a while, a quarter of an hour or more, when Rob wanted to move into him being on top.

He slipped his cock out, and I took my right dress off now, and lay on the grass for him. He came back into me and really went for it, I think he was finding it hard to come. Gabriella asked me if I was close, which I was. He speeded up and she went to work stroking his bum and talking dirty to him.

The only thing I cam remember that she said was "go on fuck her" but there was a lot more, some in Spanish.

I reminded Rob I hadn't take my pills and said not to come inside me, he was really red in the face and looked like he was lifting heavy weights ;-).. then *I* came, REALLY big big orgasm, and I think I finished him off when my muscles spasmed, he hauled his cock out and wanked himself off all over me.

I used to love watching him masturbate, but he wouldn't usually. She came and took over and finished him off, but she didn't give him a blow job, as I thought she might.

He collapsed on his back, laughing and panting.

Gabriella knelt by us and firstly opened her dress and got her tits out. Then she pulled her little tiny knickers down to the ground. She reached inside her dress and began to feverishly wank herself off.

"Suck my tits!" she said "Both of you!"

We latched on and took a nipple each. Rob had his eyes closed but when he opened them he was treated with a close up view of me sucking this woman's gorgeous big tits.

Soon she instructed us to bite them, which we did and she came, very noisily. I fancied I could hear echoes coming back off the old walls.

Finally, I looked down at myself, my naked body covered in fucking sperm - in a public place!

She'd got wet wipes with her in her bag and she insisted on cleaning us both up. It took a lot of wet wipes!

We got dressed and left, and I don't know if she'd come or not, she may have been saving the memory till later.

We stayed one more night at Alicante and we saw her again the morning of the day we left.

We exchanged addresses and numbers.

We never saw or heard from her again.

Lyn xxx

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