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Would You Like To See An Elephant?
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Bitemeplease

Sue leaned back in her chair groaning at the ache in her muscles, her groan was even louder when she saw the time. In order to sort out the mess her sales team had done she had so far stayed late at work for 2 hours. Fuck it, she thought, it'll do for tonight she was off home for a long hot bath and an early night before she came in tomorrow. Her team was in for some right shit on Monday morning for making her lose her Saturday! If it hadn't been such a huge client she would have let the shit hit the fan and they take the consequences, but luckily she spotted the mistake just as they were packing up for the weekend otherwise they would all be fired - her included.

A knock at her office door made her jump, she thought she was the only one still here. Jamie stuck his head round the door and smiled nervously at her.

"Erm...Hi Sue, can I just show you something real quick?" He asked.

Sue nodded as she switched off her computer, he could show her anything he wanted. Jamie was exactly her type he was tall, lanky but not too skinny and slightly geeky looking. With messy dark blond hair, 2 day old stubble and cute wire rim glasses hiding the most intense pale blue eyes. He was the IT manager, how he was a manger she didn't know as he was far too nervous and sweet to boss anyone around - that was the only thing that prevented him from being a perfect man for her, she much preferred someone with a back bone. But whatever her opinion on him he must do something right as any problems her or her team had were fixed right away, a Hell of an improvement on the last ‘turn it off and back on' IT manager.

Jamie placed his laptop on the desk in front of her and she saw it had a repetitive swirling pattern on it. Interesting pattern she thought as she couldn't take her eyes off the screen.

...

Following the instructions to the letter Jamie spoke in a slow smooth tone as he talked Sue through the hypnosis. He was thrilled it worked, he almost couldn't believe it as he watched her sat there calmly watching the screen. With her ample figure, red hair and green eyes she was a delight to look at and her silky smooth voice was a pleasure to listen to. But when she smiled his heart melted at how perfect she looked. She probably had a hundred men asking her out, but ever since meeting her 2 years ago when he joined the company he couldn't stop thinking about the two of them together. Unfortunately every time he attempted to ask her out his normal confidence fled and he got so nervous he had to walk away. In a crowd he could talk to her about anything, but one on one he was so afraid of doing anything wrong he just froze.

He finally hit upon the idea that if he hypnotised her for just one date that way he knew she would actually say yes, then if she really enjoyed herself she might agree to more of her own free will.

"You are in your calm and happy place." He said. "You will want to please me and go out with me when I ask you out on a...on a date." Even though she was under his control and would say yes he was still so nervous he stumbled over his words. "Where would you like me to take you? What is your favourite restaurant?"

He heaved a sigh of relief when she named one of the many places he had booked. "Ok, when I click my fingers you will wake up and remember none of this but when I ask you if you'd like to go see an elephant you will go back to where you are now, understand?"

"Yes." She replied in a calm soft voice.

Jamie clicked his fingers holding his breath. Sue blinked a couple of times then turned her beaming smile on him.

"Sorry I must've zoned out there, what was it you wanted to show me?"

"Erm.... nothing really."" He started suddenly incredibly nervous again. "Would-you-go-out-with-me-tonight?" he rushed out in one breath.

Sue's smile widened. "Of course I would love to."

Even though he had told her to say yes, Jamie couldn't control the elation he felt nor the huge shit-eating grin from spreading across his face.

"Where will we be going?" She asked. When he named the restaurant she had said her smile lit up the entire room.

"Really?" She exclaimed. "That's my favourite. What time will you pick me up? After all I can't go there looking like this."

"Why not? You already look stunning." Jamie blurted out without thinking.

Sue looked at him wide-eyed for a moment then blushed so prettily as her smile widened. "Aren't you so sweet?" She said looking down. "But I need to make myself look perfect for you." She glanced up at him coyly.

Jamie was so stunned he stuttered out "S-seven thirty."

"Ok I think I'll be ready for then if I leave now." She gave him a quick peck on the cheek, handed him a piece of paper with her home address on and walked out.

His skin burned where her soft sensuous lips had touched his cheek. He couldn't believe it had gone so well and what she had said....Suddenly it hit him why she had said that, about wanting to look perfect for him. It was because he had told her to want to please him. He rushed out of her office but she had already left, he would have to sort out when he picked her up.

He glanced at his watch and swore he hadn't realised how late it was 6.45 already? He frantically packed up his gear and locked the offices as he called and cancelled his 12 other reservations.

At 7.30 on the dot he rang her doorbell, still nervous. When she opened the door his mouth dropped open. In a short 45 minutes she had gone from stunning to perfection itself.

She was wearing a black v-necked top that clung to her curves and a red skirt that skimmed the tops of her thighs, this was the first time he had seen her legs as she had only ever worn trousers at work. Red high heeled shoes elongated those perfectly formed pins and his mouth went dry at the thought of kissing his way up them.

"Do I look alright? I could go change." Sue said sounding nervous herself. Jamie frowned he didn't like to hear the confident, beautiful woman sound unsure.

"No it's perfect, you're perfect." He said. "Would you like to see an elephant?"

Immediately Sue's features became smooth and relaxed. Jamie took her hand in both of his.

"Sue can you hear me?" He asked.

Sue nodded her eyes focused on a spot over his shoulder.

"Good." He took a deep breath hoping he worded this correctly. "I asked you to want to please me correct?"

"Yes."

"Well what would please me the most was if you had a good time. A good time that was REAL." He added after a fake smile plastered itself on her face.

"I want you to really enjoy yourself and tell me if you're not. And tell me if I'm doing anything wrong ok? I'll be very upset to find out I did or said anything to ruin tonight and wasn't told. I want you to have fun tonight, tonight is all about you do you understand?"

For a moment Jamie could've sworn Sue's eyes met his before just as quickly they unfocused again.

"Yes." She replied.

Jamie nodded and clicked his fingers. Sue immediately smiled and looped her arm through his pulling her door closed behind her. "You certainly seem to know what to say to a girl to make her feel special." She said as they walked to the restaurant.

Jamie glanced down at her thrilling she was on his arm, you have no idea just how special you are, he thought.

He had realised last Christmas party when they had been sat at the same table and talked all night that he had fallen in love with her. She probably didn't remember that night as they had both had a bit to drink, one of the reasons he had managed to carry on talking to her after everyone had gotten up to dance. They had spoken about many things, some important deep things and some ridiculous silly things that made them laugh. As she left she had leant down and given him a rather drunken kiss on his mouth at that moment he wanted nothing more than to wrap his arms around her and kiss her until she was breathless and do that for the rest of his life.

It took him about half an hour before he could relax fully and be himself with her, but he eventually did and found he enjoyed himself a lot more. They laughed and joked and talked until they glanced around realising the restaurant was closing. Jamie paid for their meal and walked her back to her house the two glasses of wine giving him enough confidence to hold her hand, glad when she simply tightened her hand around his instead of taking it back.

At her door she turned and looked at him and Jamie knew if he didn't take this chance to kiss her he would lose it forever. Unfortunately his nerves exploded over him as he took a step forward and couldn't move or say anything. Luckily Sue could and she leaned forward and pressed her lips against his. Jamie pulled her in tight to him as she parted her lips and played her tongue against his, he kissed her deeply pressing her up against the door. Sue's hands locked in his hair kissing him back just as passionately.

As his lips moved across her jaw and down her neck she gasped. "Keys, in my bag!" Without breaking contact with her skin Jamie delved into her bag and retrieved her keys. He returned his lips to hers and deepened the kiss his tongue duelling with hers. He somehow managed to fit the key into the door and unlock it, pushing the door open he pulled the key out and dropped it on the floor inside as his hands slid down to grasp her backside to pull her tighter to him, Sue wrapped her legs around him and he carried her over the threshold still kissing her as he kicked the door closed behind him.

"Bedroom...upstairs..." She gasped as she pulled her head back before grabbing his head and kissing him hard again.

"Which...door?" Jamie asked against her skin as he moved his kisses down her neck.

"Second...on...right."

Jamie found the door and laid her on the bed, he knelt above her and lifted her top, she was perfection itself.

"What's wrong?" She asked as he had stopped looking down at her.

"Nothing, just admiring the view." He replied grinning at her laugh.

"What about now?" She asked taking her bra off and flinging it to the side.

"Sorry what? Did you say something?" He asked his eyes not leaving her breasts as his hands slid up her sides to cup them, his thumbs moving over her nipples when he pinched them he turned her giggle to a moan. He only released them when she pulled his shirt off her hands roaming his chest.

He leaned down and took one of her nipples into his mouth gently, lapping at it with his tongue making her squirm under him. She cried out and her hips jerked when he grazed it with his teeth. He moved his hand down her side and unfastened her skirt his mouth moving over the rise of her stomach pulling the skirt from her, he took her panties with it as his mouth followed the progress down her legs until she was totally and gloriously naked.

He quickly took off his trousers and shoes and socks, grinning at the dirty smile she gave when she saw he was going commando and his 7 inch cock standing to attention. He knelt at her feet and worshiped every inch of those incredible legs with his hands, lips and tongue. Ignoring her gasps and moans for him to take her he took his time wanting her to enjoy this as much as he was. He finally reached her pussy inhaling the wonderful fragrance of her juices which were coating the hairs there.

He slid a finger between her lips and she was as wet as she smelt, her clit was rock hard and demanding attention, attention he gave willingly. All he had to do was brush round it then flick it a few times before she came loudly screaming, her hips rising from the bed. His fingers moved and dipped into her spasming pussy as his tongue lashed her clit prolonging her orgasm. In the end she pushed him away gasping she couldn't take any more.

He allowed her to pull him up her body and he crushed her beneath him as he kissed her deeply, even though he tasted of her juices she kissed him so passionately, pulling him in tighter her legs wrapping tightly round his waist. He couldn't believe she wanted him as much as he wanted her.

Then he froze....she didn't. She wanted to please him that was all. Oh God! He was essentially raping her! She didn't want this HE did.

"Oh God Sue, I'm sorry I.....shouldn't.....you don't want...." He tried to say as he pulled back.

"I DO want!" She insisted covering his mouth with hers and doing things with her tongue that should be illegal. She moved her hips and he slipped into her wet warm depths and all cognitive thought disappeared. All he could think and concentrate on was just how good it felt to be there.

He didn't think anything could feel better than being buried inside her, then she flexed her hips and proved him wrong. He picked up the rhythm she started and thrust deeply into her slowly at first then quicker and harder. Sue clutched at him moaning and gasping his name in his ear and he realised he was going to cum before she reached that point and he couldn't have that. He bent his head and latched on to her nipples, alternating between the two his hand slipped between their thrusting bodies and played with her clit, trying earnestly to bring her off before he shot his load. Just as he thought he had lost the battle to keep his control her body froze and her inner muscles pulsed and spamsed round his cock as he too came with a shout. It was like her pussy was milking his cock and not letting it go until he had given all he had to give.

He had never in his life cum so hard or so much and he struggled to ensure he collapsed to the side of her. He tried to say something but he was so drained he could barely manage to yawn before his eyes slipped closed and he fell asleep.

......................

Sue rolled over and opened her eyes, she smiled to see Jamie still fast asleep beside her she was glad he hadn't sneaked out on her. She lifted herself up on her elbow as she watched him sleeping, he looked so peaceful, it took all her effort not the lean down and kiss him.

Instead she power flicked his nose - hard.

"Wha...?" Jamie said jerking awake. He blinked blearily around before he focused on her he started to smile, which faltered at her stern look. Sue had to bite the insides of her mouth to stop smiling, at least he had the decency to look guilty.

"So when you took your little hypnosis course, did they explain to you that some people just can't be hypnotised?" She asked raising her eyebrows. Her hand grabbing onto his limp cock and squeezing as he tried to move away. "FYI I'm one of them."

Jamie gulped, she had never seen him look so scared. "Oh God Sue I'm sorry, I'm so sorry I hadn't intended it to go this far I just wanted to get you out on a date that was all and you make me so nervous when I'm around you as I fell in love with you ages ago and I didn't want to ruin it by messing up and saying or doing anything wrong and I thought if you enjoyed your date with me then that would be the last time I would hypnotise you and you would be willing to go out with me again but I just needed to know the first time you would say yes or I didn't think I would have the courage to ask you. I honestly never intended you to sleep with me due to the hypnosis you made last night so enjoyable I forgot and when I DID remember you moved and...and..."

Jamie finally took a deep breath and stopped gabbling, his face scrunched up into an adorable frown as he registered what she said. Sue could almost see the cogs ticking in his head.

"Hang on." He said frowning even more. "You can't be hypnotised?" He asked confused.

"No." Sue replied. "And didn't you know you can't make someone do what they don't want to do under hypnosis? All the TV shows that implant suggestions to cluck like a chicken when a set word is said without them knowing are bogus. If you don't agree to it in the first place then it won't take - or don't you watch Mythbusters?"

"So...so why did you agree to go out with me?" The poor dear was looking so confused.

Sue shrugged. "At first I wanted to see just what you wanted to do to me and I was planning on slapping you down literally if you just wanted me as a sex toy. But you didn't you were more concerned about me having a good time than you." Her grip on his cock changed, instead of holding him in place it stroked him. She felt it grow in his hand as his brain processed everything.

"So last night?" He asked his hand reaching out and suddenly pulling her in tight to him making her gasp. "That was all you? You wanted that?"

"Yes." She moaned as his hand closed over her breast and tweaked her sensitive nipple. "I've wanted you for a while, I tried to show you but you never seemed to take charge."

Jamie laughed and suddenly flipped her onto her front.

"What're you doing?" She squealed struggling under his tight grip.

"Taking charge." He said as he thrust two fingers inside her roughly making her cry out and thrust back on them. Using his other hand he pulled her up so she was on her knees, his thumb stimulated her clit and he moved his free hand to caress her breasts.

She moaned as he withdrew his fingers feeling the loss, but she grunted in pure pleasure when he thrust deeply into her with his hard cock, he thrust so hard and deep that she came almost immediately. But that didn't stop him he continued to thrust harder and faster all the way through her orgasm sending her higher than she had ever been before. Her arms collapsed and he wound his arms around her holding her up as his hand snaked between her legs and thrummed against her clit driving her wild. Before she could blink she came again and again bucking hard against him crying out his name. Finally he thrust hard into her calling out her name loudly as he spurted into her collapsing on top of her.

Sue came to as Jamie shifted off her pulling his now limp cock from her, he pulled her back into his chest and kissed her hair sighing deeply.

"Can I ask?" Sue said sleepily.

"What?"

"How did you manage to get a reservation so quickly?"

"Ah well." Jamie shifted uncomfortably under her. Sue lifted her head to look at him and he grinned sheepishly. "I didn't know which would be your favourite so I booked tables at 13 restaurants."

"You didn't!" Sue gasped. Jamie nodded looking away a flush rising on his cheeks. "That was so sweet." She said kissing him softly.

"It was?"

Sue laughed to see him still looking so nervous. "Relax silly. I liked you before and I still like you so stop being so nervous. I know you can be confident you were at dinner and I prefer that."

"So you want me to stay around?"

"Of course." Sue said grinning at him. "After all who else am I going to get to fix my computer when it goes wrong?"

..............................

Sue leaned back in her chair groaning at the ache in her muscles, a knock at her office door made her jump. Jamie stuck his head round the door and smiled nervously at her.

"Erm...Hi Sue, can I just show you something real quick?" He asked.

Sue laughed at the reminder of that day almost a year ago when they first got together, then she frowned when her sales team also crowded into her office followed by his IT team AND by the senior partners.

Jamie came round her desk and grinned sheepishly. "Sorry." He whispered. "Alex has a big mouth." He said gesturing to the grinning man by the door.

When Sue turned back to Jamie she gasped to see him knelt on the floor holding a small black box and looking very nervous indeed. It had almost been a year since he had looked so nervous.

"Sue..." He began then licked his lips.

Sue leaned forward and whispered quietly to him. "Would you like to ask me if I want to see an elephant?"

Their combined laughter grew at the confused looks on everyone's faces. As soon as he could collect himself Jamie asked if Sue would marry him, before he even finished the question Sue said yes and soon the ring was on her finger and they were being congratulated.

"So have you an idea where you want to go on honeymoon?" Alex asked.

"I was thinking a safari." Jamie said looking at Sue as she was sat on his lap in her chair. "I think it's about time Sue saw an elephant!"

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